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    Mary Sue Test for Anton

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    Kaitlyn the Boss-chan
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    Mary Sue Test for Anton

    Post by Kaitlyn the Boss-chan on July 20th 2013, 10:18 pm

    [ ] They are possessed by an angel
    [ ] They are possessed by a demon
    [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie (Dante would be severely disappointed if he was.)
    [ ] They are physically strong (Nope. ouo He doesn't have the right kind of talent for that.)
    [x] They have a rare hair/fur colour (White hair~)
    [x] Their eyes are an unusual colour (Green is unheard of among demons.)
    [ ] This happens to be red (Nerp. ouo)
    [ ] Their eyes change colour
    [ ] They have wings
    [ ] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift (UNCLE DORIAN CAN--)
    [/] They are immortal (Yes and no. Demons have the capability to live forever, but they can be killed.)
    [ ] (if a female) they have large bra size
    [ ] (if a male) they are very muscular (Baby Anton is a Slade. ouo)
    [/] They are very attractive to the opposite gender (We don't know yet, but Dante will be severely disappointed if he isn't.)
    [ ] They are telekinetic/psychokinetic/etc
    [/] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc (The demon version of sixth-sense, which is more of an enhancement to the other five senses. o3o Half-a-point, then.)
    [ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers
    [ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet
    [ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers
    [ ] They are a healer
    [x] They are from a very rich/royal family (Well his papa's a Prince...)
    [ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background (Of course he knows. He's been to visit his grandpa before.)
    [ ] They have lost one/both of their parents (ALMOST--)
    [ ] They ran away from home
    [ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc. (Hell no. uvu)
    [ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death (ALMOST AGAIN--)
    [x] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature (Pure-blooded half-angel, half-demon.)
    [ ] They never knew their parents
    [x] They were abused/spoiled as a child (I think Dante and Papa would spoil him, yes.)
    [/] They are very attractive to the same gender (Maybe? o3o Who knows yet?)
    [ ] They have lots of friends/no friends (He has the chibis. uvu)
    [ ] They look emo/cutesy (XD He's adorable, but in a Bassy-in-a-bonnet way.)
    [ ] They look much younger/older than they really are. (... Nah, he pretty much looks his age.)
    [ ] They are currently in a relationship
    [ ] They have lots of morals and state them a fair bit for example: 'I would rather be with my friends than with my boyfriend/girlfriend' 'Nothing matters more to me than my friends/family' 'I wouldn't hesitate to die in place of a friend' etc. It's fine if your OC has these beliefs/values, but if they constantly say them out loud/preach them to others, then we have a problem.
    [ ] They have a mental disorder
    [ ] They have an emotional disorder
    [ ] They struggle to stay sane
    [ ] They are a psycho
    [x] They have multiple personalities (Every demon does.)
    [x] They are very intelligent (Especially after Dorian gets ahold of him. XD)
    [ ] They have hallucinations
    [ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. (It's called a phone call.)
    [ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet
    [ ] They have a guardian spirit
    [ ] They have a 'special type' of soul (Considering the fact that the angel half of his soul is "tainted" by the demon half, no. His soul's pretty much demonic.)
    [ ] Their soul is not the same as them (Eh???)
    [ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts
    [x] Some part of their body glows (The eyes. Always the eyes.)
    [ ] They have a rare/unusual name (Mmm... No.)
    [ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, Midsummers Night, The Winter Solstace etc. (He was born in early July. ouo I think around the 2nd.)
    [ ] They have a twin/sibling that they were separated from at birth
    [ ] They are connected with a certain element
    [ ] They are connected with a certain animal
    [ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'
    [ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga
    [x] They are a race/species that is discriminated against/misunderstood (Half-demons. ono)
    [ ] They have a certain power that is misunderstood/feared (No, but he has the rarest talent. o3o)
    [ ] They live/lived on the streets at some point in their lives
    [ ] They are hiding from someone/something
    [ ] They have a rare blood type
    [ ] They cry blood
    [ ] Certain noises/smells/situations/etc make their powers activate/give them a nervous breakdown
    [ ] They are from a different country to where they live
    [ ] They are very mysterious/dark
    [x] They are very lively/happy (ouo)
    [ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly
    [ ] They are very patient (Anton's actually not. XD He hasn't been around long enough.)
    [x] They are from a long line of (insert profession/power here) (Demon Lords. ouo)
    [ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear
    [ ] They have amnesia
    [ ] They have insomnia
    [ ] They have some sort of permanent medical condition
    [ ] They have a curse upon them
    [x] They are involved in some sort of prophecy (He's the Antichrist.)
    [x] They are 'the chosen one' (THE ANTICHRIST.)
    [ ] Is considered a Moe Blob by the other OCs/anyone else (A what?)
    [ ] Everywhere this person goes, people immediately support him/her

    Total: 15

    <5 -Anti-Sue
    Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they are scoring that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit ^^


    6-15 -Balanced Character
    If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though.


    16-25 -Borderline Mary-Sue
    We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

    26< -Mary-Sue
    Oh dear. Do I really need to comment on this?

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